Marc
Anthony Novillo
Exposition
& Argument
Erin
Kelly
November
15, 2016
Research
Paper Intro
Where is the sole place on Earth is
it possible that the unknown becomes the known, the unusual becomes the usual,
and the odd becomes the norm? The power of the mind is one of the most beautiful,
complex, interesting and fascinating processes known to mankind, where it is
indeed possible for the fantastical to exist. The mind is an extremely powerful
agent against the evils of reality such that it is built with defense mechanisms
that encourage the formation of such outlandish yet comforting strands of a
story. These stories are put together by our minds in an attempt to escape the fears
and anxieties of the here and now. The brain can be rewired to perform these
processes, so much so that the senses can be enhanced when approached with
physical trauma such as blindness. “The Mind’s Eye,” by Oliver Sacks, details
how the brain physically rewires itself to compensate for blindness,
exemplifying the physiological and biological feats the brain can perform in
order to remain at full potential. Similarly, Robert Thurman’s “Wisdom” discusses
the importance of being open to the ever-changing environment and allowing for
experience to mold one into a specific “self.” This molding is one of many
rewiring techniques of the brain, suggesting a certain plasticity evident in
the minds and brains of everyone, assuming the person has a healthy and normal
brain. Plasticity, rewiring, and molding all contribute to the manner in which
humans biologically cope dissociatively, as mentioned in “When I Woke Up
Tuesday Morning, It Was Friday,” by Martha Stout. The idea of a divided
consciousness is present in everyone who has experienced trauma at some point in
their lives. Divided consciousness, the separation of mind from reality, allows
for a temporary state of imagination where all is typically okay, and this
serves as the basis of an example of how humans cope with trauma and issues
such as stress, emotional damage, mental challenges, etc. The mind is an escape
route, the mind presents an opportunity to step out of reality and enter a
realm of bliss and eternal possibilities. With that, the deep inner minds of
people are reflections of the true self, the true person a human is but will
never be understood. The deep inner mind is the best escape route from all
things painful, but is also the cause of phenomenal interactions between human
and human that are just as complex as the brains that motivate said
interactions.
I really like your topic and how you present it! The first sentence need a little fixing, maybe erase "is it" and write "where it is". I like how you introduced the reading from The New Humanities Reader and how you defined the word divided consciousness. Maybe in the parts where you list many adjectives, try to get rid of some and leave the most important ones and watch for some repetitiveness. Also, maybe define what plasticity of the brain is. Other than that, I really enjoyed reading it.
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